The Automobile- a Synasthroesmic Poem

The amazing, incredible, wonderful car This extraordinary , inexplicable part of who we are The big, the little, the long, the short, the bus An exciting, capricious part of the kid in us The clunker , the hybrid, the grand Roles Royce There are dozens, hundred, for your choice Depending on the dinero ,the dollar, the pence in your purse Or if your a CFO, a poet, or a lowly nurse (me!) There are just the wheels out there for you Be they black , green, white or shades of blue To be sure we love, hate, enjoy the automobile Yes, for almost all of us it has an addicting appeal....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 5/15/2013 11:35:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS IN THE Synathroesmic Cat Contest. Have yourself a nice day ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/14/2013 5:46:00 PM
Great winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 5/14/2013 1:37:00 PM
An excellent poem written for this contest. A well deserve win. Congratulations. Connie
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Date: 5/14/2013 1:37:00 PM
Every time I see a poem posted by Barbara Gorelick I know I'm either gonna smile, chuckle or fall down laughing...Congrats - Tim
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Date: 5/14/2013 9:16:00 AM
Perfect subject, delightfully rendered. Cars can be so loved when they run so hated when they won't start. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/14/2013 8:21:00 AM
congrats on your win Barbara, where would we be without our cars
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Date: 5/14/2013 12:18:00 AM
Great job! J
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Date: 5/13/2013 10:35:00 PM
hey, way to win the contest, Barbara. You chose an excellent topic to extol. GREAT job.
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Date: 5/13/2013 8:58:00 PM
Barbra, Congratulations, in "The Synathroesmic Cat Contest." take care*LINDA
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Date: 5/13/2013 7:13:00 PM
Congratulations. Thank you for your wonderful poem in my Synothroesmic Cat Contest. Best wishes, SuZ
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Date: 4/11/2013 11:47:00 PM
How we enjoy our cars. Some even name their cars. Enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 4/11/2013 8:26:00 PM
So true, everyone remembers that first car or their favorite. Very nice poem, thanks for the comment on my poem "Fifty Shades of Blue". I appreciate it. Doug
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Date: 4/11/2013 3:36:00 PM
busses and cluckers and just once a Lincoln. an unemployed trucker waiting for his season.
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Date: 4/11/2013 2:49:00 PM
i had to check the contest page to find out what that word meant, but you've done a fine job of doing exactly what the contest required and in a delightful way!
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