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The 1st Trimester

Champagne dreams,
chaotic screams to new extremes 
as I push deep..

Perhaps a little leaked!
I ponder laying nude, 
my girl is peacfully asleep..


Jared Pickett
4/13/2011
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Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/21/2012 8:49:00 PM Jared,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -* Login to Reply

Jimmy Anderson Date: 4/20/2011 7:06:00 AM My dude...it's good to see you back...Like your new poems. Is there going to be a little Jared running around soon? lol Jim Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/18/2011 12:03:00 PM Sensuous and sultry Jared my friend.. luv thos champagne dreams .. and chaotic screams.. it all fits so nice...luv.. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/14/2011 7:34:00 AM Welcome back Jared!!!! Who is having a baby? Are you going to be a daddy? If you are congratulations. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/13/2011 1:03:00 PM Very sensual and passionate expressions, jared, not seen much on pS nowadays? Login to Reply

Jared Pickett Date: 4/13/2011 12:36:00 PM This is the first of three poems that I will write... The title should tell you what it is in reference too... If not stay tuned and within the year you will most certainly understand... Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/13/2011 12:32:00 PM Quite a passionate poem, Jared. Welcome back. Yes, it's been a while. Soupers come and go and return again. Nice to see you posting new work. Welcome! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply