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That Place

Down with time i stand in a sphere of silent A place of no sound a place where only i can go. A place where no one can understand because no one knows. That place of everything and of nothing. That place you can be anything. That place you can be you, without needing to explain your actions. That inpenetratable vault of happiness. A place of undiluted nothingness. A place where you want to escape from but you always choose to be. Your zone, your safe place. That place where i will always be. That place you will like to be. That unforgettable always available place. A place i can be. A place you can be. A place they want to penetrate. That place you will always have. That place in you...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/11/2012 7:51:00 AM
I am so happy I was able to read your poetry today Frederick. Thank you for sharing your writing with us always. So many diverse poems here and always a pleasure to read. Hoping you will continue to find the inspiration to write. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2012 3:20:00 AM
I love it! Especially the conclusion. It surely is nice to find that safe haven. Welcome to the Soup Frederick!
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Frederick Lokko
Date: 7/11/2012 3:50:00 AM
thanks vicky

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