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That Old House

That old house was old and rusty But it reminded me of something I didnt konw exactly what But I knew it had a meaning That old house was painted gray But to me it just stood out Yea the color had faded away But their was something about that house That old house was very crooked And that grass just wasn't green But theres some things that werent seen Some things that only I could see That old house did have a reason Why it caught my curiosity It reminds me of my life And the things that make me last But the crooked doors and shattered windows Are like the hurtful times from my past

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/29/2009 5:00:00 PM
I can vision your description when I read each line. Very nice, I really like your poem.
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Date: 4/29/2009 4:37:00 PM
Very nice! Lots of imagery=) enjoyed it very much! - darkpoet
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