Thanks Kids

There comes a time in our life when we want to be set free When our job is now all done From Responsibility To you who have leaned on us from the time that you were born Although our age is showing Our hearts are a little worn Please do know that it's okay It's fine if you don't stop by We'd like to be alone now Love from your mother and I Thanks Kids

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/31/2013 6:11:00 PM

You have a wonderful philosophical bent. I will try to read more of your work as time permits. I know I can not write anything too long. My brain just won't allow it.

Dinda Minardi

Date: 3/30/2013 9:59:00 AM

yeah sometimes your grown up kids can be too complicated the more you try to get them. having sometimes alone is good. :). good write, dear Judy.

David Williams

Date: 3/29/2013 2:53:00 AM

Judy ha I love this, Happy Easter...David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2013 11:48:00 PM

hahaha. I totally agree with this one!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/28/2013 9:17:00 PM

Thanks for sponsoring a great contest.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/28/2013 9:16:00 PM

We are also empty nesters and I have to admit I am enjoying this time in our life. Do still enjoy when our son comes home for his visits.

Robert Heemstra

Date: 3/28/2013 5:09:00 PM

I'm sure your children have loved this! Thanks for your comments for "Summer my Season"

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/27/2013 9:14:00 AM

This is wonderful, a truly amazing write my friend! I loved reading this harmonious poem this morning! You have enlightened me by this remarkable piece, such an outstanding poem, Great Work!!