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TERMINAL rather than hurt you you must find another love, one shall die, you live. © Harry J Horsman 2013 TERMINAL Rather than hurt you you must find another love one shall die, you live please keep all the memories my heart will never grow cold! © Harry J Horsman 2013

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/10/2013 7:34:00 PM

Good point, I did however enjoy both.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 5/18/2013 8:00:00 AM

I agree Harry...I love writing both forms and often see haikus that should be senryus (Not that I'm an expert) Well done here my friend! - Tim

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 5/16/2013 10:58:00 AM

very awesome senryu and tanka...like it my friend Harry..have a blessed day always! :) hugs, Maria

Daver Austin

Date: 5/15/2013 12:49:00 PM

I like the Senryu because it stirs imagination - a double edged little piece. Love, daver

Len Gasun

Date: 5/15/2013 8:41:00 AM

These are GREAT CREATIONS my dear friend Harry! Two thumbs up here! I extremely love them both! Thanks a lot for sharing your gem and your creative talents! More blessings to you. Thank you so much as well for your kind visit. Have a nice day! love and hugs, Leonora

Robert Johnson

Date: 5/14/2013 1:36:00 PM

Senryu, tanka, haiku, nah.:) For me, they make my mind go blah. But when someone writes with such passion. It's all quite nice to be in fashion. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2013 6:05:00 AM

yes, the tanka is related strongly to haiku and gives us the ability to say MORE. As you have so nicely shown us here. Great seeing you this morning. I miss seeing you a lot!