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Ten Below Variations

TEN BELOW VARIATIONS it’s ten below no place to go warm roots asleep sunny sky high ten degrees below birds like shadows in the snow branches weave a tangled web ten below with snow so cozy inside coffee my fat persian licks itself drifting snow ten below zero mind sliding down a rooftop

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2014 9:39:00 PM

just came to say hello and thanks for reading!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/13/2014 8:53:00 PM

Okay, it must be very cold where you are from.... I'm feeling the chills.... Enjoyed the haiku... Linda

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/10/2014 3:48:00 PM

Well I certainly would 'mind' sliding down a rooftop in all that snow Daver Brrrr))) L O L....' certainly one to sharpen the senses, well done..'

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 1/10/2014 1:00:00 PM

Oh well, you are a champion at bringing the reader into your moment, Daver. Kiwi is downstairs, I've only the computer and a window with a view of the stark sky with tons of snow sleeping the day away. I suppose I should have my "mind sliding down a rooftop"...a very clever image to indulge in. Keep well, stay safe, love, Mikki

Syam Madappattu

Date: 1/10/2014 7:22:00 AM

nicely penned..speaks in volumes

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2014 7:06:00 PM

hey, Daver you already know how much I like these, particularly that last one, a stunner!!