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Tell the Whole World a Great Story

If you could tell the whole world a great story What would that great story be? Would the words you write Shine so bright That all of the world could see? If you could tell the whole world a great story Would it be pleasing for the mind to read? Or would you sharpen your words With thoughts never heard To plant a fresh growing seed? If I...could tell the whole world a great story It would cause all minds to be set free Allow them to look through different eyes With no hidden disguise At what the world has now become to me Danny Boy:2-12-13

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Madelin Barton

Date: 9/11/2013 9:42:00 PM

So true, very nice job friend

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/10/2013 2:44:00 PM

I love how this is written from the poet's perspective. It makes it so relatable!...This is a very beautiful poem, Dan. Nicely done! I enjoyed it...Thank you for the kind visit. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my work!

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 3/29/2013 9:54:00 AM

Very inspiring.. am gonna think it over., <3 :) thanks dear twin bro <3

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/26/2013 2:07:00 AM

Leaves one pensive and reflective.---quite inspiring and delightful. Like this one, Dan! Always, Laura

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 2/23/2013 3:16:00 PM

Dan; I love this. I want to tell the world a great story, but I'm not done with it yet. Thanks for sharing this with us. Lucilla

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/20/2013 8:33:00 PM

Most of the story about burdens they cannot see.

David Williams

Date: 2/14/2013 3:04:00 PM

Dan, we don't need to say anything when gems like this are saying ti for us....David

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 2/13/2013 5:38:00 PM

Hi my dearest Dan...and this is so amazing and very inspiring..:) I am going to tell my best story to everyone..." Happy Valentine " <3 Sk

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 2/13/2013 7:23:00 AM

This is a very nice poem. I think my great story would be - the story of me, so people would know the real me. Have you ever read my poem ( Color Me ) ? Thanks for sharing this and for reading my poems. Lucilla

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/12/2013 11:26:00 PM

This was a great way to do "seeds" and I enjoyed the message you planted!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/12/2013 10:04:00 PM

Hello Dan,ha ha... I think i just posted what I think is a great story OR can be... teeheehee..JK..on a more-errr serious side. I would tell a story about my granddaughter... she makes life the greatest... xxo~LINDA

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/12/2013 9:16:00 PM

An excellent write, Dan! A thought provoking piece. Enjoyed reading it. Love, Kim