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'Tears of Stone'

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'Tears of Stone'

when his tears fell
on her generous bosom,
they became hard stone.


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  1. Date: 3/25/2013 2:02:00 PM
    Love the haiku,,,,, thank you for reading Fairy Tales,,haven't been on for a while because I'm sick. You have a great day and Easter .

  1. Date: 2/13/2011 10:36:00 AM
    The contrast in this poem makes for powerful reading. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Karen

  1. Date: 2/12/2011 9:56:00 AM
    A very tender and sad poem to think of.. and how tears can turn solid like stone .. enjoyed..p.d.

  1. Date: 2/7/2011 6:26:00 AM
    Wow Honesty what a fantastic image, they became hard stone, love it.

  1. Date: 12/4/2010 1:01:00 PM
    so very passionate and more in these words that you have woven together,,,and I do want to Thank you for your visits to my words and for leaving yours behind,,Blessings..Cecil

  1. Date: 11/27/2010 11:25:00 AM
    The depth in your Haiku is amazing, Honesty. This is profound! Thanks for reading me and the comments you left. Love, Audrey

  1. Date: 11/25/2010 8:37:00 PM
    Oimbo, love the deepness of the change of emotions~best holiday wishes*Luv~Skat

  1. Date: 11/23/2010 8:33:00 AM
    crystalised tears cold as the stone - great imagery.... thanks for your welcome thoughts on my poem today, nice to meet you... kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.

  1. Date: 11/22/2010 7:42:00 PM
    Image of the stone you have powerfully applied.I enjoyed it,Honesty.

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 9:29:00 AM
    Wonderful haiku with apt images to express your thought

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 5:47:00 AM
    i like this haiku very much. It is very moving and also so sad. i get a very cold image from this poem. There is lots of sorrow here. Jancarl

  1. Date: 11/20/2010 6:33:00 AM
    Very moving haiku, Honesty. I can only imagine these tears turning to stone. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/20/2010 6:18:00 AM
    Very depp and meaning haiku with fine images, Honesty

  1. Date: 11/20/2010 3:01:00 AM
    Nice haiku and imagery, Honesty. Appreciate very much your kind words to my poem. (^_^) Noel.