Tears of An Angel

Every time he smiles he
lets me into the deep
waters of his angelic
heart.
I drown happily in his
sweet and magical eyes;
eyes of the deepest blue,
like the oceans that behold
many unlocked secrets.
Whilst I sleep in a
far away land where everything
seems out of reach, tears fall
down his angelic face, he embraces
me; he falls into the pit
of despair where unborn spirits
lay.
Many voices suddenly appear within
my mind but only one is clear, the 
words are full of pain and
desperate wanting; it is him
asking me to return.
But why should I?
It is so peaceful here with 
nothing but light and colour
surrounding me.
Still his voice remains, like
a quiet echo within my mind;
I must return to reality to
soothe my hurting angel.
I awake and embrace his wet
face wiping away the tears
of misery and heartache.
Suddenly he embraces me 
tightly; his heart beats 
frantically from the sudden 
wave of relief and his ocean
blue eyes begin to sparkle 
once more.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 6/1/2017 1:01:00 AM
A very well written poem, you ve excellent imaginations, this is your second poem I m reading and both are excellent
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Date: 6/3/2011 4:41:00 PM
beautiful write, very well put together
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