Tears

Tears, I hide Fears I did not see Blinded by my pride Now my tears run free And my fears are history

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Jon Terry

Date: 7/17/2012 3:28:00 PM

this is great, I am right thinking the tears made the realisation that the fear of something ending no had so the fear was lost ?

Gail Debole

Date: 6/12/2012 6:30:00 PM

Good poem. Like the way you expressed yourself. - Gail

John Loving Iii

Date: 6/6/2012 6:59:00 PM

the tears i cried last week were really ment for today. only hours ago this very day; i caught my addict in the very act.

Painted Hunter

Date: 6/5/2012 6:21:00 PM

COOL! I will have to read more of your work...but for now I have some more dirty limericks in mind...it wasn't too much was it? Thank you for stopping by.

Fisayo Aderounmu

Date: 6/5/2012 1:07:00 PM

This is brief but brave. Good job Glans.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/4/2012 8:46:00 PM

A very short and succinct quintain from you, Cherly. Much enjoyed.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/4/2012 12:20:00 PM

Good - well done Cheryl. - oxox Anne-Lise

Joseph May

Date: 6/4/2012 12:04:00 PM

nicely done Cheryl