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Below is the poem entitled TEAR DROP which was written by poet Denise Hengeli. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Compare your teardrop
To a falling leaf
Both signal sadness,
Releasing of grief

'Tho the leaf is lost
For the health of the tree
The teardrop reminds us
Of how life could be

The tear brings a cleansing
And provides a review
The leaf ends its life
So the tree can renew

Both signal a change
As seasons attest
A positive journey
Unblocks one's success

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  1. Date: 4/26/2011 6:43:00 PM
    Very good...nice rhythm and rhyme, well developed theme. I liked it.