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Below is the poem entitled Tear which was written by poet Sandra Adams. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Tiny droplets of moisture
edge their way out
across my cheek, soft trickles
rush past my lips

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  1. Date: 9/28/2013 10:04:00 PM
    This is a short but deep and powerful story of the teardrop. nicely done

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 10:45:00 AM
    The short journey of a teardrop makes a great acrostic. You might like the teardrop mentioned in my "Reflection" found in my portfolio.... Jake

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 3:53:00 PM
    very deep Sandra... congrats..Linda

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 1:37:00 PM
    Congrats on your great winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 2:44:00 PM
    a lovely acrostic congrats on win Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 4:00:00 PM
    Very nice write...congratulations...Peter

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 1:58:00 PM
    Sandra, , congratulations on your acrostic win. ~ SKAT

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 8:04:00 AM sad...great description....congratulations...

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 7:32:00 PM
    congrats on a fine win Sandra

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 7:14:00 PM
    Terrific write and win! Hugs

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 5:40:00 PM
    So beautifully descriptive in its simplicity. I just loved this one. Congrats in my contest.

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 4:46:00 PM
    So fragile so real, enjoyed your acrostic xxx

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 7:28:00 AM
    Few words; but deeply expressive Acrostic, Oh! Sandra.

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 7:18:00 AM
    This is sad and beautiful in it's simplicity. I hape all your tears are converted to tears of joy.

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 10:12:00 PM
    Hello Sandra, this is a really great acrostic. SAD.... you described the running tears perfectly. I loved all four lines in the word tear. The imagery is what it is. 7..... always~ Linda

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 8/24/2013 6:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much for stopping by to read my poem and for your wonderful reply! hugs
  1. Date: 8/23/2013 9:58:00 PM

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 9:23:00 PM
    A very creative and sweet expression. It's a wow :)

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 8/24/2013 6:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much Karen, I appreciate all your kind replies...I hope you have a great weekend! Hugs