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Below is the poem entitled TASTE OF REAL SUCCESS which was written by poet Amit Valmiki. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I believe,
A light will fall on me,
This will make me shine like the sun.

I believe,
All dreams of mine will meet their ends,
I will get one what I have dreamt of.

I believe,
Now I am very close to success,
As dream is needed first before we act for those.

I have dreamt it, that what I want.
Action is the next step that I have to take.
My patients will support me through all pains,
My dreams will give me courage to struggle all fails.

I believe,
I should keep on trying the same,
Unless I get the one that I need to fame.

This or that, but it was only the way I thought about,
The success and way of living.

But believe me, now;
As my mom explained me the real success,
And she gave mystery of getting it.

I believe,
I should not kill the peace in me for my own sake,
Otherwise; humanity will die which rest in me.

I believe,
In being man of value rather than of success,
And, my success resides in keeping myself kind and considerate to others.

(Written this poem when inspired by my mother, love you mamma for making me a valuable person.)

Copyright © Amit Valmiki

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  1. Date: 2/8/2012 10:08:00 AM
    Keep believeing! Inspiring work! Yours Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 7:50:00 PM
    feeling seem to have an effect on you, good stuff

    Valmiki Avatar Amit Valmiki
    Date: 9/12/2011 5:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Sean for stopping by my page. waiting for your next one,love and bless. Amit Valmiki (India)
  1. Date: 8/8/2011 8:16:00 AM
    really very inspiring and there are good no. of advices many have to follow...the success of a man depends on his dreams, hard work as well in helping others and making a good network of trust and true friendship. that is what I believe. Thank you friend for sharing.

  1. Date: 8/8/2011 7:49:00 AM
    Amit Valmiki, done a wonderful piece of writing.. thoughtful lines depicting success as a moral value and not as the theory of Survival of the Fittest... Let Kindness and Humanism pervade and prevail.. keep it up

    Valmiki Avatar Amit Valmiki
    Date: 9/12/2011 5:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    preserving humanity is what needed most in this world of selfishness. thnx Suhail for motivating me on writing such more poems by commenting such a nice words. good luck