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Tangled Vines

An orange trumpet vine in its beauty Orange trumpet flowers bright intriguing It grows reaches for the sun 'pon trellis' strong towers So lovely and shady is its green vine drawing most humankind to climb ~~Climb until they reach its first level where other vines intwine Vines intwined of such strength and beauty One that is mixed in there is Passion Flower Passion on this first level hasn't passed away All vines honeysuckle, jasmine, poison ivy reach for the top At the very top tangled vines wrap around healthy trees slowly choking out the life Strong vines cut into the outer bark getting tighter every year Soon the inner being suffers crushing By the strong vines which cut deeper, deeper and deeper each years growing season The trees who gave support are now overcome by a mass of flowery death Tangled vines have overpowered Their deceit and trickery has accomplished its death deeds The tangled vines are at the top but the trellis of strength and support Is about to topple Sponsor: Constance La France Contest: Tangled Vines Written this Fourteenth Day Of July 2013

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Date: 8/7/2013 9:32:00 AM
Sara, you are an amazing prolific writer. Who are your sponsors? Where do you get your inspiration? You may want to check out my poem on waterfalls. It may resonate the ones you have written on that topic. Allan
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Date: 8/1/2013 4:31:00 AM
Poet, Excellent poem. Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful poetry I'm thankful.
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Date: 7/31/2013 1:32:00 PM
This is not what I expected at the beginning..but it really took off..congrats to you on your big win. BG
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Date: 7/31/2013 4:03:00 AM
Wonderful and lovely piece,Sara...Great write...Congrats on your well deserved win...
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Date: 7/30/2013 7:10:00 AM
Lovely Sara congrats on your win Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/16/2013 12:11:00 PM
Strongly build toward the climax. Beautiful piece of work... and true... Grapevines here are the problem.
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Date: 7/15/2013 1:49:00 PM
A sure win. a great poem. very strong meaning. Good Luck honey!
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Date: 7/15/2013 11:41:00 AM
This is a great poem. I just know it will win. I have a tree in my front yard that has beautiful flowers, but now that I have been sick it has grown some vines. I just hope they are not bad. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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Date: 7/15/2013 9:19:00 AM
this has a power that sets the mood of the scene to escalate and reach a striking end... love the fine phrasing of this wonderful, tangled piece with a trellis of flowers... :) huggs
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Date: 7/15/2013 7:46:00 AM
Fearless, vines that choke. Sara never so well expressed. Best wishes in the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/14/2013 8:28:00 PM
This is brilliant, such a tremendous write! I just love how you built up the poem as the vine got stronger and stronger every year! I truly enjoyed reading this spectacular piece, What a lovely poem, Great Work!! PS my family was in a car accident a few nights ago and I have been dealing with all of the injuries from that. It was a major accident, but luckily everyone is ok except for a few bumps and bruises and lacerations! I may not be able to comment as often I usually do during this time...
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Russell Sivey
Date: 7/14/2013 8:32:00 PM
so bear with me my friend, it'll get back to normal soon, I hope!

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