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Tangled Vines

The ancients said, “The heart holds the soul” But who can know the home of my being? Am I to believe the words of the dead? Or shall I search myself from within? Now you are gone, the pain is surreal Introspection may well be naught I look within myself to find A way to climb back from the abyss Find my pain and the answer will be clear My loss is as tangled vines running deep Crushing soul and choking spirit My heart holds the pain and slowly dies Grasp the vines tightly and begin the climb Back to myself as I try not to fall The dead may hold the truth after all 7/12/13

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Date: 7/31/2013 1:36:00 PM
One of my favorites in this contest. congrats. BG
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Date: 7/31/2013 7:46:00 AM
very well done! i enjoyed your take on the contest. congratulations!
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Date: 7/30/2013 2:52:00 PM
Creative way to go with the topic of the contest..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 7/30/2013 6:45:00 AM
I relate to the introspection. You brought out you theme very nicely. Congratulations on the win :)
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Date: 7/26/2013 8:06:00 PM
Hello! Tangled vines - Nice one here keep your ink flowing. That would be a neat trick.
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