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Tangled Vines

Getting through the jungle is not so easy when I have to contend with tangled vines. Swinging through the trees used to be a breeze, but now they are growing every which way. I don’t have a clue about how I got here, but Jane is always by my side each day. Civilization? I have no idea of its meaning. I can’t explain these objects flying overhead. Are those the things people use to get there? July 2, 2013

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Date: 8/2/2013 4:30:00 PM
A hunter has no mysterious notions about the jungle. Lovely read.
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Date: 7/31/2013 7:45:00 AM
ha! funny and clever. congrats!
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Date: 7/30/2013 2:55:00 PM
Cute way to go with the topic of the contest..Enjoyed reading it ...Got a chuckle..Congras on your great win..Sara
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Date: 7/10/2013 2:48:00 PM
very original. I really enjoy your take on the tangled vines theme. Wish this had occurred to ME!!
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Date: 7/8/2013 10:26:00 AM
I like what you did with the topic...nicely done.
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Date: 7/4/2013 12:11:00 PM
Very deep and expressive theme of life. It is indeed a tangled vine, never perfect. Great Poem, Robert. Check out my poems, might find one you like. Peace.
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Date: 7/3/2013 5:55:00 PM
An interesting take on this theme. "don't let go of the vine." Quote by Tarzan. Remember the movie well. Good luck Robert in the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie
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