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Tangerine Morning

Frost carpets the fields sloping to a crinkled sea. The air, cotton crisp as spring leaps in. Satin crows descend from a silver sky. Squabbling, they graze on chilled dewdrops. The sunrise, a red ribbon glow warms tall tree trunks basking in gliding sunlight. A flame horizon burns a candy stripe sky on a tangerine morning.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/17/2011 10:07:00 AM
best wishes to you, eiken.. how this piece flows magically is sheer mystery!! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/14/2011 8:15:00 PM
This is just wonderful. Congatulations on this new Fave poem for me!
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Date: 3/14/2011 5:07:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely comments everyone, I am really humbled. I was away so not near my computer. What a lovely surprise to come home to. Well done to everyone else with their wins:))
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Date: 3/11/2011 1:08:00 PM
This a really good piece Eiken, i think that described scenes, including the season/element portrayal as interactive with flora fauna (which it is ) focus the reader glad i picked this to read!
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Date: 3/9/2011 5:40:00 AM
Lovely descriptive write Eiken, congratulations on your win :) W
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Date: 3/9/2011 5:01:00 AM
Beautiful description, really enjoyed reading you poem today.
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Date: 3/8/2011 10:59:00 PM
What a very delightfully descriptive morning this is! Wish I had one of those, Eiken-- really enjoyed this-- superb imagery you give here-- congrats on your win :D
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Date: 3/8/2011 8:27:00 PM
Congrats Eiken on your wonderful win in Chris;s contest .. an awesome write and win luv.. so enjoy....
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Date: 3/8/2011 8:19:00 PM
I really like this Eiken, beautiful morning time the best time of the day, excellent and congrats on your winner. Harry
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Date: 3/8/2011 5:42:00 PM
Magnificent description as I've come to expect from you, Eiken. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/8/2011 4:40:00 PM
beautifully expressed, love it, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 3/8/2011 12:44:00 PM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Chris, Eiken
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Date: 3/8/2011 11:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Chris's contest eiken. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/6/2011 1:49:00 PM
Wonderful poetry, your coloured descriptions are amazing, one of your great strengths. Déirdre
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Date: 3/6/2011 1:42:00 PM
Nice expressions well worded on a tangerine morning, Eiken
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Date: 3/6/2011 6:02:00 AM
Very nice... beautiful poetry written..always Michael
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Date: 3/6/2011 4:14:00 AM
Beautiful as can be..
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