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Tanabata Knock

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Tanabata Knock

and snake oiled gleaming

That day of grey Tuesday was remediously teeming

Simply chilli,
chopped onion,
or tragedy-eyed streaming

Girls Gone Wilderness, 
two sopping wet cupfuls

I opened, then poured some number of n-tuples

We were one o’ those 
fight nail,
tooth pick olive,
and lemon twisted couples

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  1. Date: 2/9/2011 11:01:00 AM
    Welcome to PoetrySoup Benjamin. I know this is a late welcome but, I have some very pressing matters going on at the present time. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next couple of weeks. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/1/2011 11:23:00 PM
    Girls gone wild ! Interesting write.

  1. Date: 2/1/2011 4:36:00 AM
    This is imaginative, good poem. I had to read it a couple of times and smiled. Very good.