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Taming the Senses

Light dims from fever of day … bare as skin of fireflies’ touch skating among petals strewn from a breeze that wafts fragrance of stillness ~ Gazing at last tints of night where stroll of life traverses an inner odyssey, hushed… until all creation binds oneness of soil’s center, taming senses ~ © 7/7/7/10 (x2) Contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/23/2012 9:22:00 PM

Nette, Congratulations in Rick's 7/7/7/10 - (x2) contest. :-) always~ PD

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 8/21/2012 8:58:00 AM

Beautiful words of light and wisdom penned, Nette! Congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/21/2012 6:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in ^Rick's "7/7/7/10-x2"" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/20/2012 9:35:00 AM

congrats Nette luv on a fantastic win for a fabulous entry .. superbly stated.. still felling low.. but trying hard to bounce back to ME again.. thankxx fo4r all your delightful comments.. they help so much..lkuv..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/20/2012 4:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your smashing win xx

David Williams

Date: 8/20/2012 2:40:00 AM

Nette congrats on your great win....David

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 8/20/2012 1:54:00 AM

Wonderful and great write,Nette...Congrats on your superb win...Ride on brother...

Don Johnson

Date: 6/25/2012 4:55:00 PM

love it Nette babe

Susan Palli

Date: 6/25/2012 2:01:00 PM

excellent write, loved it

Jack Horne

Date: 6/24/2012 11:28:00 AM

what a beautiful piece, Nette

Kash Poet

Date: 6/24/2012 6:39:00 AM

Aare kahan chala gaya?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/23/2012 7:10:00 PM

You worked wonders with Rick's form, Nette. Wish I could have done so well!!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/22/2012 10:17:00 PM

oh my Nette luv this is stunning.. a top notch creation ..best wishes for big winning.. marvelous words .. incredible imagery.. luv it ..

Diane Christian

Date: 6/22/2012 1:12:00 AM

aww that is a nice poem, I am not good at thats tyle of wriitng but love it, thanks for your kind comments and yes you are an angel for sure we all are in our own ways and wow the day we get wings will be awesome. take care God bless you

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/21/2012 2:46:00 PM

This is a really beautiful write my friend, very beautiful! I thoroughly enjoyed this expressive and delightful poem Nette! You have delivered an amazing, impressive creation! I love reading your poetry whenever you post them, they pique my senses, or in this case...tame them!! Great Work!!