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Taken Control

I want the pain to go away to be able to wake up and enjoy my day can you explain how I'm suppose to be  because the loss of you has taken control of me so please someone explain what I'm suppose to do because I can not deal with the fact that this is all true.

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Date: 2/5/2016 5:47:00 PM
Chantelle, Excellent read. Great flowing piece. Have a nice day. ** SKAT
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Date: 6/29/2011 2:18:00 AM
i can but feellyour words and the power they carry, it like we wake up and lie our lives at yesderdy was the truth, and we dont have to, powerfull ,yet loads of empthy like ti her you sing more Hemi. PS thanks for what you sain about my poem
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