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i am the last to walk this path as i look at the people around me my eyes fill with tears for they don't know there lives are built on ignorance sometimes i smile for they walk with me i am the last to hold this wait i have chosen to carry this this fate is mine and mine alone joy floods in to my soul as but one hears just one make the wait light as he stands up and walks alone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/27/2009 7:30:00 AM
good write, congrats on the win, it is great!!
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Date: 10/17/2009 1:41:00 PM
seems like a long wait you must carry but a victorious write in this contest congrats!
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Date: 10/16/2009 5:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Matt's contest John. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/13/2009 4:39:00 AM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. First stanza, fifth line is especially nice. Sara
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