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Sweet velvet chocolate taste

A warm night breeze across your face

A new born baby's very first smile

Children playing all the while

Birds flying in the sky

Wishing wells where waters lie

Oceans deep and oh so blue

Brilliant sunshine gleaming through

The moon the stars 

They shine so bright

Turns the black night sky to light

A twinkle in ones eye of joy

A smile that offers love

The smell of flowers in full bloom

So fragrant they are, they fill the room

Be still, and feel your own heart beat

Celebrate your life

Take time to notice


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  1. Date: 2/25/2010 2:44:00 AM
    good positive thoughts! A nice way to start my day, too early.

  1. Date: 2/24/2010 6:05:00 PM
    a profound mesage! Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/23/2010 2:53:00 PM
    Dear Simone, Take Time and Notice is beautiful and reminds us how much we have to be thankful for in this world. Thanks for sharing, and thanks for your kind comment on my poem, Rocking Chairs. Love, Amy.

  1. Date: 2/23/2010 3:40:00 AM
    Simone thanks for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 2/22/2010 7:45:00 PM
    Thank you for the info on Bruce Lipton very interetsing

  1. Date: 2/22/2010 2:07:00 PM
    Very enjoyable write, Simone. Did you get my reply to your Soup Mail? Sometimes my Soup mail feature doesn't work. Anyway, if you didn't get it, I am sorry. And the answer is, you are very welcome! Absolutely. Could you send me the name of your publisher? Thanks! Peace, love, Audrey

  1. Date: 2/22/2010 1:33:00 PM
    Simone. wow, I thought I was reading an entry into the Favorite things contest! ARe you entered. this one fits the bill PERFECTLY!! Luv, andrea

  1. Date: 2/21/2010 8:47:00 PM
    Very nice!

  1. Date: 2/21/2010 1:41:00 PM
    If only everyone could take time and notice the world around us and how beautiful it really is. Stunning use of words, wonderful talent!

  1. Date: 2/21/2010 9:51:00 AM
    If your view of the world could be shared, and people realized and held onto what was important; then there would be peace on earth. Your work is wonderful and inspiringand yet unique--it gives me a warm and fuzzy feeling everytime I read it. Thanks

  1. Date: 2/21/2010 6:11:00 AM
    such peasure in little things, great write

  1. Date: 2/21/2010 6:08:00 AM
    wonderful Simone. all reminders of natural beauty to be grateful for. Robert

  1. Date: 2/21/2010 5:29:00 AM
    Once again Simone, beauty is brought to the page by your words >> James