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this trail. as i walk reminds me of life's paths so many choices which way do i go i see the people those that pass before me those behind as they come and go with hurried hellos i stop and watch the ebb and flow of the stream it's just a slow trickle but i hear it whisper over the rocks i look at the trees with upturned roots it's hard to believe they played "london bridges" and all fell down beneath its fury when the sky cried not so long ago the birds sign in harmony little locusts chime in with back-up vocals as the butterflies dance gracefully atop wild flowers yet no one sees except for i

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Date: 8/25/2013 7:57:00 PM
You are very observant...this is a very pleasant scene that isn't appreviated by some who don't notice....very perceptive :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/26/2013 6:35:00 PM
thank you...I love walking on the trail...even as a child I always liked to sit beneath the trees and watch nature... well except for the bugs, they always scare me...
Date: 8/25/2013 5:25:00 PM
If you take the time, yes :) Lovely one, sweet Sandra. It seems that way, doesn't it?
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Date: 8/25/2013 5:48:00 PM
we have nature trails near me, and I can walk them for hours and find a place and sit, often taking my camera to snap some shots of nature...everyone on them will pass and say hi, but they run, ride bike, ignore the beauty... thanks for reading...I jotted this down on my walk :)

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