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Take my hand

Take my hand,
Take it now,
You can trust me,
I’m like you.

Don’t be scared,
You’re save now,
They can’t hurt you anymore,
I want to help.

I want to help,
Ease the pain,
‘coz I know it won’t go away,
Take my hand.

Take my hand,
We’ll fly away,
We’ll start over,
Away from here.

We’re deferent,
You and I,
Take my hand,
We’ll fly away.

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  1. Date: 5/30/2010 11:56:00 PM
    This sounds like a new beginning. I like the flow of the words and the message. This is wonderful. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Joseph

  1. Date: 5/19/2010 2:23:00 PM
    sounds like you're a caring person :)

  1. Date: 5/19/2010 3:33:00 AM
    Hey really nice poem...

  1. Date: 5/18/2010 7:42:00 AM
    It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Annelien. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 5/18/2010 6:12:00 AM
    Interesting write that seems to be your encouraging words to the reader...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara