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Take Me To That World

Take me to that world Where I can be what I want Where the things I imagine come to life Where minds connect and resonate as one Where anger, corruption and sorrow are unknown Where peace, prosperity and happiness are only known Where even nature knows only to hum Where will I find such a dream world?

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Date: 10/25/2010 4:05:00 AM
Sounds like a lovely place to be. .beautiful!Celene.
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Date: 10/23/2010 6:04:00 AM
Splendid.I'm sure everyone who reads it will spend a large fraction of their solitary time wondering about such a place. Shine on, Aseem
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Date: 10/22/2010 2:57:00 PM
take me with you... shaingrala!! LOL
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Date: 10/22/2010 2:54:00 PM
Alas! There is no such place as a Utopia on Earth. Very well-versed write. I loved it. Best wishes. Taha
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Date: 10/21/2010 7:24:00 AM
Nice lyrical write to create a sanctuary peace, bidyut and thanks for commenting on my poem. It's morning here. so Good morning
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Date: 10/21/2010 7:18:00 AM
It sounds like heaven, Bidyut. Hopefully we'll get to see this place someday. I love the form you developed in this write as well as the content. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 10/21/2010 5:30:00 AM
I love this write especially your last line. Thank you for your comment as well :) Wilma
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