Syncope Senses -Win

Lifted is the fabulous February’s cover,
And I have seen you scantily dressed,
Now I see the buds & flowers all over,
Then by the wild winter camouflaged.
Cool breeze sends messages caressed.

Blame not if March makes me spree             
Be assured, I shall be in April amorous,
Adoring you till Midsummer Day glee
Maybe June can make me ambitious,
Dear me, July keep me quiet joyous

The adorning August may make anxious
I am not certain of sensual September,
Lest I may be way-out but courteous.
What is conceived from September,
Gestation starts from sober October.


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6th place win 
Contest any poem goes by Skat-Love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/12/2013 9:24:00 PM
Sensually displayed seasons. Creative write, Dr.
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Date: 11/11/2013 11:21:00 AM
Congrats on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 11/10/2013 9:27:00 PM
Dr. ... Congratulations, thanks for the support..... ~SKAT~ LOVE
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Date: 5/30/2010 5:56:00 PM
Dr. Ram, you have done it here. I really like this. It flows easy, free and unforced with honest sentiment. A keeper. Thanks and regards, Gerard
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Date: 5/30/2010 5:41:00 PM
Great write that should do well in the contest..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 5/30/2010 9:55:00 AM
What a creative trip through the seasons. Interesting use of personification. Keep that pen flowing. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 5/29/2010 4:01:00 PM
Sweet poem. I enjoyed.
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Date: 5/28/2010 6:37:00 PM
TERZA RIMA, NEVER READ THIS FORM. SOUNDS GOOD TO ME. ENJOYED NICE MESSAGE TO YOURSELF,,SKAT
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Date: 5/28/2010 12:57:00 PM
I was born in March...another reason for me to love your poem...great writing! Emily
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Date: 5/28/2010 9:04:00 AM
Vers nicely written account of the seasons, Dr. Ram! Enjoyed reading it. Thank you for your ongoing comments and have a great weekend...Gert
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Date: 5/28/2010 6:17:00 AM
This is excellent. I like the tone of the poem. The rhyming pattern keeps it flowing quite well. Keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 5/28/2010 3:37:00 AM
Unique write that tackles the months, seasons and our emotions and the diversity thereof .. Love it Dr. Ram - rgds Wilma
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Date: 5/28/2010 3:09:00 AM
Good one to remind us of the ever changing cycles that we see, feel, and find in our everday lives just by watching more closely. Great write. Dan C
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Date: 5/27/2010 11:18:00 PM
A brilliant account of the emotions that emerge with each season, Dr. Ram. Well done! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/27/2010 10:42:00 PM
You "covered" all the months I think except November to January. Those are such dark and dreary months, I'd just as soon forget them anyway. a very unique write, Dr. Ram. And how astute of you to understand the import and purpose of the sestet of the Italian Sonnet. LUv, Andrea
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