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Symphony Storm

A storm begins the performance 
Ominous clouds 
Prepare the stage 
Lighting streaks the sky 
Setting the ambiance 
Each small drop 
Begins a new note 
Wind blows the trees 
Like strings in an orchestra 
Frogs voice 
A choir to the show 
Thunder clashing 
As the background percussion 
As the sun breaks 
The tempo slows 
With clearing skies 
The performers take their bows 
And nature's awe-struck audience 
Will return again 

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  1. Date: 7/21/2013 9:32:00 AM
    HI Jillian, I like this awesome write. Congrats, on having your poem featured on the soups home page. Have yourself a nice day. LUV* ~SKAT

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 8:55:00 AM
    Jillian, Congratulations on your featured poem of the week. enjoy life with smiles :-) love <3 LINDA

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 10:08:00 AM
    Very powerful & almost redeeming. I enjoyed this!

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 11:40:00 PM
    This is lovely, the sounds and imagery... Nicely done

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 10:23:00 PM
    I LOVE IT! It reminded me so much of Richard Strauss' Eine Alpensinfonie. It's a symphonic tone poem, so musically descriptive, of a journey to the top of a mountain and down the other side. On the way down, all hell breaks loose as there's this massive storm. Strauss uses FULL instrumentation, including a man hurling himself against sheets of aluminum to simulate the thunder! Well done Jillian!! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 5:04:00 AM this a lot, very well done Jillian. - oxox love Anne-Lise