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sweetheart

sparks begins
igniting the embers
lighting a flame
flickering feelings
in the deep chambers
emotions burn hot
blazing beautiful
you are

burning red
the hearts passion 
melting one soul
sweetly honey
drunk in mead
sweet wine in
one goddess

delightful beauty
melting passed
the eyes
unto this soul
angel you
take one's
breath away

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  1. Date: 11/4/2013 2:58:00 AM
    "Melting past the eyes unto this soul" a captivating verse. Beautiful and romantic... a wonderful read!

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 6:50:00 AM
    Beautifully written my good friend... what a romantic guy you are!!!

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 2:44:00 AM
    Such a bacchus of emotions Liam..taking the breath away of any reader who loves romantic verse- Charma : )

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 10:49:00 PM
    Lovely work Liam.

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 8:11:00 PM
    Beauty and passion in your poem. So lovely.

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 7:21:00 PM
    such a sensual write...she makes your muse sing beautifully...your words are so soothing and lovely...beautiful poem my friend...hugs :)

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 6:24:00 PM
    - Liam ... Liam .... Liam ..... and Liam ....... Always sweet and romantic ..... and I love to read your work!! - Have a great weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)