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Sweetheart

sparks begins igniting the embers lighting a flame flickering feelings in the deep chambers emotions burn hot blazing beautiful you are burning red the hearts passion melting one soul sweetly honey drunk in mead sweet wine in one goddess delightful beauty melting passed the eyes unto this soul angel you take one's breath away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/4/2013 2:58:00 AM
"Melting past the eyes unto this soul" a captivating verse. Beautiful and romantic... a wonderful read!
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Date: 11/3/2013 6:50:00 AM
Beautifully written my good friend... what a romantic guy you are!!!
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Date: 11/3/2013 2:44:00 AM
Such a bacchus of emotions Liam..taking the breath away of any reader who loves romantic verse- Charma : )
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Date: 11/2/2013 10:49:00 PM
Lovely work Liam.
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Date: 11/2/2013 8:11:00 PM
Beauty and passion in your poem. So lovely.
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Date: 11/2/2013 7:21:00 PM
such a sensual write...she makes your muse sing beautifully...your words are so soothing and lovely...beautiful poem my friend...hugs :)
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Date: 11/2/2013 6:24:00 PM
- Liam ... Liam .... Liam ..... and Liam ....... Always sweet and romantic ..... and I love to read your work!! - Have a great weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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