Sweet Sonnet Bird

When on the path of poetry I tread,
I rarely know the scenery I’ll find.
I hear a bird that sings inside my head
and measures steps iambic in my mind.

At times it seems a mountain that I climb.
I work but do not sweat. . . it’s more like play!
And each five steps I take, a word must rhyme
with one that’s ten feet farther on my way.

Although I often plod, I hate to rest;
I follow where sweet bird is wont to go
and often double back while on my quest
to find each turn of phrase most apropos.

But, oh, that words to match her melody
would come as swiftly as her song to me!

for the Which is your favorite poem form? Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 11/2/2015 3:43:00 PM
Yes..sonnets..love them..congratulations on your win my poetic sonnet writing friend
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Date: 11/2/2015 2:25:00 PM
I knew you would choose a sonnet for the contest - many congrats on your win - i aspire to write sonnets like you, Craig and Frederic and many others, I still have much to learn:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/2/2015 12:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea. I also chose the Sonnet. Love the way you did yours. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/2/2015 12:32:00 PM
Hi Andrea: I love the way you use a bird as a Muse. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/2/2015 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations
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Date: 11/2/2015 12:08:00 PM
Congrats Andrea! We love the Sonnet Bird! Love, Balveen
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Date: 11/2/2015 11:49:00 AM
Andrea, awesome win. SKAT
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Date: 11/2/2015 10:33:00 AM
my guesses were etheree and trochee yet this stands out, andie... sweet congrats..huggs!
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Date: 8/14/2014 6:24:00 PM
Grats on your beautiful first place win :) Well done
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Date: 8/14/2014 3:42:00 PM
I think you do well..' good to visit keep well Joe..'
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Date: 8/13/2014 2:12:00 PM
Would that you could lend to me that "Sweet Bird." I am so in awe. Most enlightened words I've ever heard. Unlike you, dear Andrea, I struggle to rhyme. Love, daver
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Date: 8/13/2014 8:09:00 AM
Love it! congrats on your win. So creative...following the song of the sonnet bird to write your own.
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Date: 8/12/2014 9:51:00 PM
Beautiful write Andrea ..congrats on your win
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Date: 8/12/2014 8:35:00 PM
I love this, Andrea...very beautiful write. Congratulations on your top win.
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Date: 8/12/2014 6:29:00 PM
Oh, you devilish little bird, sitting on top of the tree.
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Date: 8/12/2014 3:39:00 PM
This one sings Andrea!
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Date: 8/12/2014 3:35:00 PM
goodness, andie.. this is stunning..love every line and imagery!.. sweet congrats all the way!.. huggs
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Date: 8/12/2014 3:09:00 PM
Went to a nice reading on Saturday. I have poste your poetry on Twitter Poets House. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/12/2014 11:32:00 AM
Another wonderful sonnet,,,,never could tire of such wondrous poetry..... your comment page as turn on to page two,,,and one hell of a task leaving a comment,,,managed after about 10 minutes.
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Date: 8/12/2014 10:33:00 AM
Congrats. Well-deserved win!
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Date: 8/12/2014 10:23:00 AM
It is a spontaneous overflow, Andrea. Well done. Congratulations on your deserved first place win!
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Date: 8/12/2014 10:08:00 AM
a good write this, written with care...
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Date: 8/12/2014 9:43:00 AM
There's the sonneteer! Go Andie, congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 8/12/2014 7:04:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats Andrea am still in awe at this incredible write:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/12/2014 6:58:00 AM
Amazingly beautiful Andrea! Congrats on first place win!
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