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Sweat In Winter Time

It’s on winter time And the window got soaked With the sweat running with time Where the meaning we sought we knew that it came Rather to us even in perspiration for just now we indulged Not really spelled out but instead in satisfaction Naturally then passes more cravings Day after day, night after night and for more!
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/2/2013 7:18:00 AM
- Looking forward to many pleasant poems and comments from you in 2013, Dalila. - HAPPY NEW YEAR ! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/2/2013 4:39:00 AM
I like the unique image that you put in here, Dalila! Very creative to say that, "sweat in winter time"-- I am so glad to read this post from you-- I soupmailed you awhile back and did not hear back from you-- I hope that all is well with you-- are you back in the States already? hugs sent your way!
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Date: 12/27/2012 2:32:00 PM
A lovely written poem Dalila. - The year 2012 is almost over. - I thank you for all the nice poem you have shared with me, and that you have taken the time to read and comments my poems. - Always pleasant, I appreciate your visit. - I have enjoyed a lot here at P-Soup and made many good friends. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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