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Suzie Haus

I had a horse named Suzie Haus when I was twenty-one.
I had wanted her since I was seven, the waiting was finally done.
She was the most beautiful thing I’d ever seen, in the World up to that day.
And forever in my memory her beauty will continue to stay.
A painted mare with a black mane and tail, then brown over white.
She became the best friend I’d ever have, you might say we were tight.
I fed her every morning, as I talked to her as I cleaned out her stall.
Then every night I did the same, plus cleaned four hooves all.
I brushed her to a shine, I was so proud of her each day.
Then with a saddle, reins, and me…we were on our way.
The stable was near a river, on top a great big bluff.
A dirt road shadowed with trees allowed us to strut our stuff.
As we danced down the road, the lightening bugs rejoiced.
And gentle breezes touched us, giving the leaves their voice.
Then peace would settle round us, as off to trails we would sashay.
This was the stuff that dreams were made of, and I had it every day.
Birds could be heard throughout the woods, the serenade complete.
I saw the river far below, and the sky with clouds of fluff so sweet.
Sometimes we were with others, but most often we were alone.
But it didn’t really matter, for we always knew the way home.
As we turned to go down the bluff, the river urged us to come below.
Deer danced on the land beneath, in the fields a buck and does.
The gentle angle to the floor below, allowed us to mingle in.
They let us close within a few feet, they thought Suzie was a friend.
At the river the blue sky with a reddish sunset had lite everything aglow.
Soon river barges came floating by, and it was quite a show.
Fishermen sat there minding their peace, until the moon began to glow.
The moon twinkling on the river below, was always beautiful and clear.
We’d talk a while, and breathe so deep, the air had a different flavor here.
Once I met a young man looking for inspiration to write a song.
At that time it began to rain so I helped him quickly get where he belonged.
He thanked me profusely, as he made it to his car.
I had helped him save his love, a very beloved old guitar.
From inside his car he played a song he’d written, while he had been there.
I sat upon Suzie beneath a canopy of trees, that sheltered me, I swear. 
Finally the rain and song were done, my serenade complete.
Then I rode off back to home, later achieving more memories and gentle treats.

Copyright © Carol Eastman

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  1. Date: 6/28/2011 1:21:00 PM
    Carol, Congratulations on your beautiful third place poem, a pleasure to read. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 6/26/2011 1:04:00 AM
    Reading this was like reading a beautiful story.. Amazing write!! I've come to like those in this contest which have been done in kind of narrative. Congrats to you Carol... love, gautami

  1. Date: 6/23/2011 8:07:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in this reminiscing of this memorable horse, Carol. A very sweet story.

  1. Date: 6/23/2011 4:19:00 PM
    Congrats on 3rd Place, Carol. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph

  1. Date: 6/23/2011 4:07:00 PM
    Congratulations Carol. I am sure you have many happy memories of your horse. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/23/2011 1:32:00 PM
    My congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, Carol

  1. Date: 6/23/2011 12:36:00 PM
    Congrats Carol on your excellent win in the horse contest with this exciting entry .. luv that title too..enjoy ..luv..

  1. Date: 6/23/2011 11:44:00 AM
    Congratulations and thank you for supporting my contest Carol. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 8:44:00 AM
    aww this is great. nicely done i want a horse but know little about them lol