Surrounded

Songs and minutes, smoke and maroons
Swirl and shake in a majestic monsoon

Words and winds radiate from this relic
But it's heartily broken, hardening into a brick

She's surrounded by specks of sparkling sand
But notices nothing in this loathsome land

She feels frustrated-- thrown for a lonesome loop
In the desert and deserted, all she does is stoop

It's not a secret that she's surrounded
But how she remains alone leaves her astounded

She looks, and listens, and does legwork
But somehow all she sees is dust and dirt

There's not a place of paradise-- one oasis
Except for her lone entity that can grace all graces

Her feelings have descended, discouraged by not a find
How can a sapphire so beautiful be so blind?


March 2010
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Beesley Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 1:12 PM
gorgeous groove making those magical moves
Devonshire Avatar
April 4, 2010 at 9:02 AM
I like the conflicting images that fill this write, BD. Sounds like someone who is very confused and many of us can relate to these feelings. Very nice! Happy Easter, Carolyn
Cheeseman Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 4:10 PM
Magical write loved the flow Daniel and thanks my friend
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