Surfing Poseidon

I saw you riding the wild waves cool trade-wind breezes blowing, through your long dark curly hair; dropping off the lip in adrenaline rush through spectacular silver liquid tubes as you obsessed glassy spiral perfection so wantonly barrel dragging your hand caressing her curves, so seductively the ultimate liquid thrill then soul cruising a long ride in……. I, infatuated with your form Seduced by perfection I just knew in fathom depths of my heart inside,out I fell in love with you, forever on that day.... Your soulful sultry brown eyes, red- brown tanned smooth silk skin strong muscular frame, power built broad chest to rest my weary head upon.... the body of steel pleasure I can’t lie or deny that I want all of your delicious kisses, and your strong warm caring arms wrapped around me with the same passion that you caress her curves. you know that I can’t get enough of you... my surfing Poseidon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 3/31/2009 12:50:00 PM
Christie ,Thanks.I edited it i wasn't happy with it as it was.It need more passion. thanks for the comment,my friend!
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Date: 3/31/2009 12:49:00 PM
This poem is about meeting my husband while surfing in Hawaii
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