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Superior Itch

superior itch
must be scratched using a gun
insanity plea

Russell Sivey

Entrant into Gwendolen R.'s "A "Gun"-o-ku" contest

1/20/2013

lifehaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2013 4:36:00 PM

that last line is GREAT. Insanity plea. Yeah they always try to use that one, don't they? Congrats on this one, Russell.

Debra Falgout

Date: 2/26/2013 2:58:00 PM

Congrats on your win Russell, have a blessed evening, debra

Kash Poet

Date: 2/26/2013 10:34:00 AM

Congrats Russell!!This is an awesome write!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/26/2013 10:27:00 AM

Many congratulations on your number 1 Russell xx

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 2/26/2013 4:02:00 AM

Russell congratulation on your win. An excellent Hailku. Connie

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/25/2013 11:41:00 PM

This paints a very true picture with few words. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/25/2013 11:06:00 PM

Many congrats Russell for this well deserved win

Ray Dillard

Date: 2/25/2013 9:25:00 PM

Nice job Russell! I wish we could find those with the itch in time to help us all! Well thought write here! RAY

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/25/2013 9:04:00 PM

Russell, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/25/2013 8:24:00 PM

A psychological thriller is what this gun o ku is!! Great to read your work in my contest, Russell...congrats. Refer to my blog! Blessings to u and your family! gwendolen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/20/2013 1:21:00 PM

I hope it is not loaded if you are scratching..Enjoyed reading..I got a chuckle...It may not have been meant to be funny though..Reads like winning material..Thanks for stopping by..Your visits are uplifting..Sara