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Super Duper Discounts

There once was a man named Art 
Who was thrifty and shopped at WalMart 
He was happy with life
As he rode on his bike
Till the bearings fell apart ...

By: Kyle Ezra Kriticos

Copyright © Kyle kriticos

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  1. Date: 10/10/2013 10:02:00 PM
    This is cute and creative. Fun and humorous. Someone find art a bike repair shop. LOL nice job

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 7:47:00 PM
    ha ha love the limerick KyleStopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 10:56:00 AM
    Reading you and the comments make me understand "life in America" as I wouldn't learn it from my English grammar books...hahaha. Thanks a lot. So, that was WalMart!? Interesting!:) Hanitra

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 4:12:00 AM
    Kyle, stopping by to say good night~PD

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 4:31:00 AM
    If you ever see any of my comments on here, You will see that one of my favorite things to say is "SUPAH DUPAH" and this is a Supah Dupah Limerica,,,reminds me of one I wrote recently called "VIAGRA Falls" ....Walmart theme is dope!

  1. Date: 10/15/2011 8:25:00 AM
    Careful with the WalMart bikes, bud. Made in China...doesn't that tell u enough? lol. A very funny limerick...and oh so true. :)

  1. Date: 10/9/2011 10:41:00 PM
    Hahah ya I bought a bike at good old wally world......maybe ill stick to electronics and bags of chips when I go there :P

  1. Date: 10/9/2011 8:15:00 AM
    LOL, you bought a bike at WalMart's presumably? Loved this fun piece

  1. Date: 10/8/2011 10:09:00 AM
    Now he's trying a skateboard, But his progress is not going forward. He lost his balance, Because of the wrong stance, In hospital now, he's in 4 ward. Sorry Kyle. Couldn't resist. ;) Loved your little limerick so much I had to play with it a little. God Bless, JB :)

  1. Date: 10/6/2011 5:24:00 PM
    Oh Kyle, I wonder if wal mart sells bearings. You funny boy, I love these things, forget what they are called!