Kash Poet Poet Tanka

Sunshine In Her Smile

Sunshine in her smile
like soft afternoon sun rays
forming a rainbow
in my grey and cloudy sky
after a heavy downpour.

Give me more sunshine
O faraway sunlight girl,
this old fragile heart
now longs for more sunny days,
wake me up from my slumber!



© kash poet
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Placement:1st; (October 2012)

Contest:Tanka Crazy--Sunshine

Sponsor: Leonora Galinta


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Eileen Manassian March 4, 2013 at 12:08 PM Kash, you are gifted! Wow! This just warms my heart. :)

Gwendolen Song October 30, 2012 at 2:43 PM This is spectacular, Kashi! The magnetic pull of her sunshine will definately wake u up! Convincing and powerful narrative! :) ps...I read your son's latest posting the other day...he has such maturity in his work...u must be proud! :) gwendolen

Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2012 at 11:42 AM Congratulations on your winning poem in "Sunshine" contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A October 29, 2012 at 8:33 PM Kash..:-), CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your awesome poem in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy - Sunshine" contest. Have yourself a sweet night * Luv~PD

Olusegun Arowolo October 29, 2012 at 5:28 PM Beautiful piece,Wonderful write,Kash..Nice going,friend...Congratulations on your superb win in this contest...Keep flying....

Nette Onclaud October 29, 2012 at 3:10 PM kashi!... you nailed it.. so fab!.. wooohoo.. congrats with huggs!..:)

Andrea Dietrich October 29, 2012 at 3:01 PM Yes, a most deserved first place win, my friend. Congrats to you!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 29, 2012 at 11:23 AM CONGRATS KASH ON A PHENOMENAL WRITE AND OUTSTANDING WIN LUV ..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl October 29, 2012 at 10:00 AM Big congratulations on you win Kash xx

Debbie Guzzi October 29, 2012 at 8:12 AM I hope your Sunny gal does as you ask! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Joseph May October 29, 2012 at 7:13 AM congrats on your great win Kash...

Carol Sunshine Brown October 29, 2012 at 5:36 AM Congratulations on your win in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy-Sunshine" contest Kas. Love, Carol

Len Gasun October 29, 2012 at 5:34 AM Congratulations Kash for winning 1st Place in my contest “Crazy Sunshine”. You filled me up with so much happiness while reading your splendid poem. Thank you so much for your full support . May the sun shines in your life always. Love/hug, Leonora

Harry Horsman October 25, 2012 at 2:47 PM awesome tankas Kash, good luck...

Dinda Minardi October 24, 2012 at 9:15 AM Good luck for the contest, Kash. you got candy pen I think, all of the words that flow are tempting! :)

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday October 22, 2012 at 11:01 PM Cheer up, my friend and good luck for the contest with such a poignant song!:) Hanitra

Andrea Dietrich October 19, 2012 at 11:13 PM hi, Kash, I came here to maybe judge my contest, but it is going to be so difficult!!! See ya when I see ya!!

Nette Onclaud October 19, 2012 at 6:12 PM grrreat; you've risen from your slumber, kashi.. i got so busy.... hody, bud!.. drop by!.. fascinating write!..:) huggs!

Cindy Cayton October 19, 2012 at 12:01 PM Dearest Kash, This is just beautiful. Your love, caring and passion shows. Sincerest regards, Lucinda Cayton

Len Gasun October 19, 2012 at 12:00 PM ILTSM! kash, thank you so much for stopping by and reading my poem. Good luck always! love, leonora

David Williams October 19, 2012 at 11:28 AM Kash, this is just great, wonderful image, I love it...David

Sara Kendrick October 19, 2012 at 11:20 AM Ahhh!! Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Kathryn Collins October 19, 2012 at 9:28 AM Hi Kash - The melancholy is stunning. love, Kathy

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 19, 2012 at 2:36 AM A GORGEOUS CANVAS OF ROMANTIC WORDS THAT GLOW KASH .. U R SO MASTERFUL AT CHARMING THE EYES OF THE READER LUV .. BEST WISHES .. A SUNNY DELIGHT ..

Ilene Bauer October 18, 2012 at 4:36 PM very sweet, with lovely imagery. i love the line "o faraway sunlight girl" - nice!

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