Get Your Premium Membership

Sunshine For the Soul

sun kisses the dew with feathered hues of sequins the whole world glitters with extravagance of light in the red bannered sunrise no trumpets are heard for the wide lift of pink sky as the crimson sun greets the earth without fanfare but wraps the soul in splendor Leonora Galinta's Contest: Tanka Crazy/Sunshine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/30/2012 11:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in "Sunshine" contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 10/29/2012 8:36:00 PM
CARRIE..:-), CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your awesome poem in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy - Sunshine" contest. Have yourself a sweet night * Luv~PD
Login to Reply
Date: 10/29/2012 3:19:00 PM
a first-class write, carie!.. congrats with huggs!..:)
Login to Reply
Date: 10/29/2012 3:07:00 PM
a GEM, Carrie, and for me it's a first placer!
Login to Reply
Date: 10/29/2012 11:46:00 AM
CONGRATS CARRIE ON A DELIGHTFUL WRITE AND WIN FOR SUNSHINE .. VERY ENJOYABLE PIECE LUV ..
Login to Reply
Date: 10/29/2012 10:05:00 AM
Big congratulations on your win xx
Login to Reply
Date: 10/29/2012 8:26:00 AM
verse one is perfection, need more pivot on the last 2 lines of verse 2..because you dropped the verb down a line it makes it too connected not enough of a segway? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 10/29/2012 5:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy-Sunshine" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 10/29/2012 5:41:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie for winning 2nd Place in my contest “Crazy Sunshine”. You filled me up with so much happiness while reading your splendid poem. Thank you so much for your full support . May the sun shines in your life always. Love/hug, Leonora
Login to Reply
Date: 10/26/2012 10:40:00 AM
Reading this brightened my evening, Carrie! I especially liked your 2nd line here, very unique! Sending you soupmail in a bit...as well as hugs.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/25/2012 7:25:00 PM
Beautiful Tanka!Love this Carrie.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/24/2012 8:20:00 AM
Oh Carrie...another beauty from your pen..perfect flow, each line a gem...I usually pick a favorite line when I read your poems but I can't do it on this one, so I declare it a tie
Login to Reply
Date: 10/24/2012 8:12:00 AM
Ahhh! Very expressive and descriptive work..Thanks for stopping by..I do enjoy the poetic quality of your work..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 10/23/2012 12:01:00 PM
Wonderful reading your amazing poetry today Carrie. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 10/22/2012 8:00:00 PM
Lovely, Carrie. I especially liked the word extravagance. What a fresh view! Hugs, Cyndi and best wishes in the contest
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things