Sunset Musing


loneliness led my steps to the drifting river . . .
  and her echoing verge
    and I lingered there pondering, contemplating

until the glorious sun rested on a whispering wave . . .
  pure gold and motionless and tranquil
    it hung there hesitating, so reluctant it seemed

among streaked mauve feathery clouds . . .
  the golden sphere seemed to float on the rolling water
    oh, how beautiful was the eventide

as I stood and mused my life, my journey thus far . . .
  the flaming orb sank sweetly into the azure blue
    and silently gone was the hushed dusk


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August 9, 2013

Poetry/Free Verse/sunset musing
Copyright Protected, ID  08-497-905-09
All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France


Submitted to the Standard contest, Theme #3 Sunsets, 
sponsor Skat and PD, Judged 2013

Fifth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 1/8/2016 11:41:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your -SUNSET- win..... Love LINDA
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Constance La France
Date: 1/9/2016 4:34:00 PM
Thank you Linda !
Date: 1/1/2016 10:42:00 AM
What a lovel piece, congrats and Happy New Year Constance.
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Date: 1/1/2016 3:48:00 PM
Richard, thanks for the lovely and the congrats, and Happy New Year to you also ~
Date: 1/1/2016 10:32:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful Broken Wings congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/1/2016 3:49:00 PM
Jan, thanks for the beautiful and the congrats and hugs !!
Date: 1/1/2016 10:17:00 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your SUNSET win. Thank you for all the time you took supporting and entering my contest this past year 2015:-) I really enjoyed every entry. Please don't be upset if you are sharing a placement or did not make the top 10. I feel every poem, should have been placed higher. Stop by my latest Blog "On the first day of January - Next To Me" when you'd like or have time. Celebrate your win on the first day of January.... Have A Blessed Year. Love SKAT
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Constance La France
Date: 1/1/2016 3:51:00 PM
Skat, thank you so much for all the wonderful contests you have given us, and for my awesome placement in this contest, I am deeply honored, I do wish you would change your mind about leaving us ~
Date: 8/20/2013 9:13:00 PM
lovely, Broken, .congrats... love ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/19/2013 5:05:00 PM
Broken, a beautiful sunset poem ... congratulations!! Linda
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Date: 8/18/2013 3:57:00 PM
Beautiful poem Constance love its flow congrats on your win Shadow x smile
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Date: 8/18/2013 12:37:00 PM
- B.W, CONGRATULATIONS ON A GREAT FIRST PLACE!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/18/2013 8:37:00 AM
This one captivated me Contstance, you are indeed a talented poet. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/18/2013 4:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win my dear friend Constance. Thank you so much for your very spectacular and outstanding poem. I love it so much and so enjoyed. Thank you so much as well for your full support. Have a blessed day! Big hugs! Love lots, Leonora
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Date: 8/16/2013 3:05:00 PM
this is so beautiful, Constance. Have a wonderful weekend, my friend x
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Date: 8/9/2013 8:19:00 PM
Very beautiful poem best wishes in the contest! Laura :)
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