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sunset musing


loneliness led my steps to the drifting river . . .
  and her echoing verge
    and I lingered there pondering, contemplating

until the glorious sun rested on a whispering wave . . .
  pure gold and motionless and tranquil
    it hung there hesitating, so reluctant it seemed

amongst streaked mauve feathery clouds . . .
  the golden sphere seemed to float on the rolling water
    oh, how beautiful was the eventide

as I stood and mused my life, my journey thus far . . .
  the flaming orb sank sweetly into the azure blue
    and silently gone was the hushed dusk


August 9, 2013

Free Verse

Written by Broken Wings (Constance La France)

For the contest, Poems About Sunsets, Leonora Galinta 

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  1. Date: 8/20/2013 9:13:00 PM
    lovely, Broken, .congrats... love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 8:12:00 AM
    Such a well deserved first Constance--beautiful images!

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 5:05:00 PM
    Broken, a beautiful sunset poem ... congratulations!! Linda

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 3:57:00 PM
    Beautiful poem Constance love its flow congrats on your win Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 12:37:00 PM
    - B.W, CONGRATULATIONS ON A GREAT FIRST PLACE!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 12:36:00 PM
    congrats on your win xxx

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 8:37:00 AM
    This one captivated me Contstance, you are indeed a talented poet. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 4:43:00 AM
    Congratulations on your first place win my dear friend Constance. Thank you so much for your very spectacular and outstanding poem. I love it so much and so enjoyed. Thank you so much as well for your full support. Have a blessed day! Big hugs! Love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 3:05:00 PM
    this is so beautiful, Constance. Have a wonderful weekend, my friend x

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 8:19:00 PM
    Very beautiful poem best wishes in the contest! Laura :)