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Sunset Lake

Sparse eerie green clouds camouflage
A harvest-time full moon
Creating quiet illusion
Crescent moon open strewn

Dragger shaped twinkling diamond stars
Slide across silver back
Lending a quiet essence there
'Pon silhouetted pitch black

Alluring moon drew sleepy eyes
Come circle sunset lake
Grip a lovers strong hand caress
Kiss love, there's no mistake

Moon reflected 'pon sunset lake
Created atmosphere
An euphoric lover's haven 
Thinking very unclear

The moon in its silvery essence
Spoke of amorous mood
Bequiling scene set, engaged thoughts
Forgot you're shrewd and crude

It's the harvest moon's total fault
Engrossing was its hold 
No matter how handsome was he
My lips shouldn't have been bold

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  1. Date: 11/6/2013 9:05:00 PM
    Sara, , this is a pretty deep Blame It On The Moon poem.... congrats... LOVE ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 6:44:00 PM
    Nice to have the moon to blame it on. Congratulations on another win Sarah. I'm finding you in a lot of winner circles. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 12:16:00 PM
    Fantastic poem. Stunning images. Congrats on your well-deserved win.

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 6:35:00 PM
    How wonderful is this moonlit poem......engrossing its hold on you...and the rest of us as we read it !! :) Nicely done, Sara!!

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 6:02:00 PM
    A nice romantic picture excellently adorned. Enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 6:01:00 PM
    lovely romantic write....something about moonlight just seems to make a perfect romantic scene...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 4:01:00 PM
    Here in Wisconsin, there is actually a lake named Sunset Lake, where we go swimming in the summer!...Wonderful imagery in this romantic poem! Really great work, Sara, I enjoyed it very much. Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 7:32:00 AM
    you do this so well Sara congratulations xx

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 1:33:00 AM
    A very beautiful picture you have given me. wonderful write on the harvest moon....Peter

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 12:13:00 AM
    The Harvest Moon is one of romantic endeavors as is your lovely poem. I enjoyed very much. Mahalo

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 12:09:00 AM
    Such a beautiful picture you have painted with your lovely words:)

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 5:33:00 PM
    This is a wonderful moon inspired write my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this harvest moon poem this evening Sara! What a lovely piece, you have masterfully portrayed a great Harvest Moon environment here within this poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 4:41:00 PM
    love this, my friend

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 2:05:00 PM
    Nothing ventured, nothing gained. Again that darned moon..This is good...hope it ranks high on the list. BG

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 1:33:00 PM
    love it and why not be so bold lol xx