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Sunset Dreams

Dazzling flecks of gold fall lightly from flight, joy and grace spun from translucent silk spools. The sun like orange sherbert melts from my sight, resplended in a rich robe of fine jewels. A cooling sky bathes in soft sunlit pools. Honeysuckle blooms on the horizon. Cotton clouds yawn, puffing over the sun. Taste the sweet dreams of her ripened peach gloam. From Heaven, kisses goodnight have begun. The sun, now spent, sleeps so bright stars can roam.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/29/2012 10:14:00 PM
RHONDA, a wonderful CONGRATULATIONS in Francine Roberts' contest... these are some nice winning poems in her "Top five Sunsets" ... always~ PD
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Date: 7/27/2012 1:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Top Five Sunsets" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/26/2012 4:51:00 AM
Congratulations Rhonda a worthy win xx
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Date: 7/25/2012 3:38:00 PM
Metaphors like [translucent silk spools] will get you a win everytime! Lovely winning write congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 7/25/2012 12:35:00 PM
congradulations on your win! Jane xoxo
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Date: 7/25/2012 11:14:00 AM
Beatifully said. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/25/2012 10:44:00 AM
Rhonda super congrats on your win, excellent write...this is just beautiful..David
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Date: 7/25/2012 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with a lovely sunset.
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Date: 7/25/2012 8:33:00 AM
great imagery Rhonda, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 7/20/2012 2:24:00 PM
This is a masterful and peaceful write my friend! I just love the images you present within this poem! You've painted with awesome strokes from a creative brush, beautiful! Great Work!!
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Date: 7/20/2012 2:02:00 PM
Dream like and peaceful..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I am glad that I stopped by this one...Thanks for stopping by my work, reading, and taking time to comment...Sara
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