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Sunset

Ribbons of rose in a darkening sky purple strokes of evening's artist whose brushes tip each fleeting cloud's silver lining with a hint of gold leaf.. sun still giving one last hurrah of a dying day, before slipping down into satin sheets of a lavender sea..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/2/2009 6:25:00 AM
Wow. What an absolutely breathtaking picture you paint. Stunning beauty. Thanks Valerie for your congrats, appreciate it very much. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/17/2009 9:34:00 AM
*For the movie suggestion, oups!* :)) sorry
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Date: 5/17/2009 9:33:00 AM
hey, valerie, thanks from the movie suggestion! if you say you're interested in mystery, love and especially fantastic and legendary creatures, i suggest you read the Twilight series written by Stephenie Meyer, it's absolutely brilliant, about vampires, werewolves and other myths. that's where all of my inspiration comes from, the language is very rich and sensitive. i hope you get the chance to read them, they're worth it.
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Date: 5/17/2009 2:52:00 AM
omg... i'm just.. speechless... great write!
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