Sunrise

Natures own delight. A beautiful end to night. Simply breath taking.

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/18/2011 9:28:00 PM

Congrats Erica on a wonderful win for this creative Haiku luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/18/2011 11:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunrise Haiku" contest Erica. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 11/18/2011 9:11:00 AM

Erica congrats on your great win..David

Bob Quigley

Date: 11/18/2011 8:18:00 AM

Well written Erica. Congratulations

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/18/2011 3:05:00 AM

Congratulations on the win with this fine entry to P.D.'s Contest, Erica

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/18/2011 2:34:00 AM

ERICA, congratualtions on your sunrise haiku entry, for my contest. I had a lovely time reading every entry. Take care,..p.d.

Jim Wilson

Date: 11/14/2011 2:36:00 PM

I like the simplicit of this haiku. The use of rhyme is engaging. I wonder, though, if the commas help? Particulalry L2 feels to me like it doesn't really need one. It's a small point and I enjoyed reading this. Best wishes, Jim