Sunlight

I haven't seen a ray of sun Since 1869, For vampires know a secret- Blood tastes better by moonshine So, in the midnight moonlight I wrap up in my cape And through the town I creep- No, no one can escape This vampire so thirsty For a drop of blood-just one- To suck from something human 'Fore the rising sun.

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Kash Poet

Date: 4/20/2011 8:28:00 AM

Congrats Cherie on your well deserved win in the contest--kash

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/19/2011 6:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Sunlight" Cherie. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/17/2011 3:47:00 AM

Hey Cherie, congratulations on your win ;)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/16/2011 5:53:00 PM

Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest, Cherie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2011 3:30:00 PM

oh, wow,yours is right beneath the OTHER vampire poem. Cool! congratulations.

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 4/16/2011 2:55:00 PM

Congrats on your win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/16/2011 12:43:00 PM

Congrats Cherie on your super win in the Sunlight contest .. an exquisite entry as I read before..luv this one.. enjoy with luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/16/2011 11:32:00 AM

Super congrats Cherie-- this was the more serious vampire write among the two I received and equally enjoyed it :D-- now I know that blood tastes better in moonshine, very nice :)

Gautami Phookan

Date: 4/16/2011 5:32:00 AM

Excellent imagery..Vampire and sunlight ,or no sunlight juxtaposed. Very creative write Cherrie.Good luck in the contest.Love,Gautami

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/14/2011 7:34:00 AM

Wow Cherie this is magnificent.. how imaginative to use Dracula vampire to create about sunlight which they run from.. great ..just great.. good luck in the contest.. know Nikko will scream over this one for it's originality luv..

James Foulk

Date: 4/13/2011 1:54:00 PM

if they saw day light is all over, kiss it good bye baby, over and out, is over, a great piece of work, i love stories about vampire and movies also, thank you for your comment on when things were simple.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/13/2011 11:46:00 AM

I am reading such diverse poems here at PoetrySoup. Poet's hearts are bleeding poetry today. That is where the best poetry comes from. It has been my pleasure to read your poetry today Cherie. Continue to write and share it and I will be back to read it. Have a wonderful day and may you find inspiration along the way. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/13/2011 11:24:00 AM

Interesting topic..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/13/2011 7:54:00 AM

Wow!! I didn't expect this Cherie. Certainly should catch the judges eye. Thank you for your kind comments on my offering. Love, Joyce