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Sun Follows the Moon

There it is again
sun peeping behind the clouds
made for perfection

the crimson rays fade
falling down to horizon
darkness defeats light

colors of twilight
silence in the green meadows
moon enslaves the sun

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  1. Date: 10/29/2012 5:21:00 AM
    Lovely Haikus Eldaine! You've painted the scenery so well. Good work!

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 11:48:00 PM
    Wonderful use of of haiku! Great imagery and flow! Welcome to the Soup and keep up the great work!

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 5:35:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you Eldaine. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 1:13:00 AM
    First I want to welcome you to the P-Soup. - Hope you'll have great pleasure to share your poems here with us. - I like your Haiku very well. - There are many here who are "experts" on Haiku - (I'm not) - I've written a few Haiku. - And that's my way of writing them. - I write what I think and feel here and now - that's my way. :) You are welcome to read my poems. Have a nice day. oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 12:24:00 AM
    honestly, this is the first haiku i ever made and i learned it since yesterday. I need you comments, corrections, advice, etc. Don't worry, I'm an open minded person. Thanks in advance.