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Sun Follows the Moon

There it is again sun peeping behind the clouds made for perfection the crimson rays fade falling down to horizon darkness defeats light colors of twilight silence in the green meadows moon enslaves the sun

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/23/2016 12:23:00 PM

Eldaine, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/16/2016 4:16:00 PM

Eldaine, enjoyed reading the words you poured on your poem. Have a wonderful day. **SKAT **

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 10/29/2012 5:21:00 AM

Lovely Haikus Eldaine! You've painted the scenery so well. Good work!

Daniel Mcadams

Date: 10/19/2012 11:48:00 PM

Wonderful use of of haiku! Great imagery and flow! Welcome to the Soup and keep up the great work!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/19/2012 5:35:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you Eldaine. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/19/2012 1:13:00 AM

First I want to welcome you to the P-Soup. - Hope you'll have great pleasure to share your poems here with us. - I like your Haiku very well. - There are many here who are "experts" on Haiku - (I'm not) - I've written a few Haiku. - And that's my way of writing them. - I write what I think and feel here and now - that's my way. :) You are welcome to read my poems. Have a nice day. oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Eldaine Lee

Date: 10/19/2012 12:24:00 AM

honestly, this is the first haiku i ever made and i learned it since yesterday. I need you comments, corrections, advice, etc. Don't worry, I'm an open minded person. Thanks in advance.