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Summer's Love Call

Birth of a bird's song, Symphony of a new day; A Summer's love call.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/6/2009 12:39:00 PM
Nice haiku, love the last line, best of luck with this one...Raul
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Date: 9/30/2009 5:45:00 AM
Congratulations, Abe! The images are beautiful in this lovely and perfect Haiku! Good luck in the finals! Love, Robin
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Date: 9/24/2009 7:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your making the first rounds in the finals! Laura :)
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:15:00 PM
Abe, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition, good luck mate >> James
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Date: 9/5/2009 10:18:00 AM
Now that's what I call a "knock 'em dead" haiku! Perfect 5-7-5 syllable count. The wording is absolutely splendid! I love haiku and this one is a masterpiece! Thank you for sharing your brilliance as well as your masterful skill. Congratulations on a well deserved feature! Milt
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Date: 9/5/2009 7:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Abe>>James
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Date: 9/1/2009 9:37:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku. Too bad summer is almost gone :( Love, Iolanda
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Date: 9/1/2009 12:35:00 PM
Nie poem
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Date: 9/1/2009 4:31:00 AM
wonderful haiku, tremendous expression of words, Congratulations: Regards: Déirdre Ó Maidín
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Date: 9/1/2009 4:06:00 AM
Congratulations, Abe, on having your well-written Summer's love poem featured this week. Your words joyfully entice the mind. Keep writing. Lovingly, DAS-J
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Date: 9/1/2009 3:02:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week. A. W.
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Date: 8/31/2009 11:54:00 PM
Abe, congrats on your feature this week...Raul
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Date: 8/31/2009 4:16:00 PM
What an uplifting view! Nice use of imagery. Enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 8/31/2009 7:23:00 AM
This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem, worth featuring..; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful pieces. You are great Abe! Adeleke
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Date: 8/31/2009 4:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Abe. Hope to see many more of yours featured. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/31/2009 12:08:00 AM
Congrats on your featured poem this week Abe.Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/30/2009 6:54:00 PM
So lovely, and well deserving to be featured this week!! Congratulations Abe on this perfect little haiku!! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 2/20/2009 4:06:00 PM
Abe, I hope that we all start hearing the bird's song. Here in North Florida it's still too cold! Lovely image in this poem, Carolyn
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Date: 2/10/2009 8:26:00 PM
I love hearing a bird's song...Another great Haiku
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Date: 2/3/2009 9:55:00 AM
Such a beautiful haiku. Longing to hear them. Love, Shar
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Date: 2/3/2009 3:08:00 AM
A call we are all waiting for. Tyler
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Date: 2/2/2009 5:23:00 PM
This is perfect, Abe. I love to hear the birds first morning call. Lovely haiku! Love, robin
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