Summer Time

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This poem was written with the inspiration of my very special month of the year and those who will be celebrating their birthdays on the same very special month-the Librans and Octoberians.

October has finally come, Mr. sunshine wants me to have much fun; “Oh, my darling can’t you see? I’m so busy preparing for my birthday party.” Why do you keep on wheedling me? I don’t want go to the beach with my bikini; Besides, I don’t want to get sunburn My body will be chafed with prickly heat in return. You’re so naughty like a spoiled brat, But still, I love you with all my heart; I’m now going to the beach at once Wearing my jacket, hat and jogging pants. He gives me then the biggest grin, I didn’t know he has a scheme with the wind; “Where is Mr. Wind?” I asked Is he already at the beach to bask? My Darling sunshine gives me his cutest wink, Summer is not really that fun I still think; I headed off to the beach with my desired attire Protecting my skin from burn and making it dry. At the beach, I see adults and kids, Playing happily… sandcastles they build; Not so far, I saw old friends of mine, Beckoning me, so I change my mind.
Sept. 22, 2013 5.45 a.m. Note: I woke up earlier today, morning of Sunday here ;)))). I’m so inspired to write this poem. I am looking forward to one of the most important and significant months of the year for me. A poem especially dedicated to all my loving fellow Octoberians & Librans;))) Looking forward to bask along the beach with you;)) First Place Contest: Poem in the Morning Due Judged: 10/2/2013 Sponsor: Poet PD

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Date: 11/27/2013 1:20:00 AM
Hello my BFF, and lovely sis LEO... , Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA
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Date: 11/5/2013 11:51:00 PM
hello my dearest sis and BFF, I see you on line... I ran out here quickly in hopes you were posting a new poem.... what a long night, I'm starting to miss Summer and October all of a sudden.... My dearest, I found this one amazingly awesome once again...I' will add this one on my favorite list again... naughty naughty we are.... Hugs... love LINDA
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Date: 10/9/2013 11:32:00 AM
Lovely Leonora, , nothing I love more than embracing mornings with beautiful words and imagery. Congratulations love SKAT
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Date: 10/5/2013 10:15:00 AM
So joyful and a delight to read! Congratulations Leonora !!
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Date: 10/3/2013 9:05:00 PM
Excellent, Leonora. Nice going. Congrats. Ralph
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Date: 10/3/2013 9:22:00 AM
beautiful write, of course as a Libran and October baby myself I could not help but love it....congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/2/2013 9:32:00 PM
Hello My sweetest sis Leonora, I hope you got my blog comment... :-) I was happy to see your pics:) Very Pretty... Leo, you are by far my most favorite poet ALWAYS~~ CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting my "Morning Due <--not DEW! Contest. SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL- Thanks for the awesome imagery. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem "The Letter". Enjoy my latest blog! "Daybreak" if you like:) AT -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15983&PoetID=18720 **LINDA**
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Date: 9/30/2013 9:03:00 PM
Hello my dear Leonora!! How are you? What a cheerful and beautiful poem you have here! A great write and a lovely poem! :) xoxo hugs and kisses.
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Date: 9/27/2013 10:51:00 AM
Ahh!! Great quality poetry..Enjoyed the mood of the poem..Sara
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Date: 9/26/2013 1:18:00 AM
I will join you on the beach celebrating your special day..where is it? hehehe (^_____^) I like your poem so much my dear friend...well, actually all you poems....keep up the good work always.. God bless you always. mwuah! hugs, hugs,
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Date: 9/24/2013 11:07:00 AM
the libran scales dip on your favor, dear lory... this is such a winsome piece.. are you an october girl?... here, it's rainy season, you know that already... loving this, miss ya.. take care!..:) huggs
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Date: 9/23/2013 1:33:00 PM
Really very nice poem. Mr. Sun is lover, hahaha. Loved your fun. Loved always, bl
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Date: 9/23/2013 9:30:00 AM
Hi Leonora, Some nice thoughts here..I appreciate the beach part as I live close to our beaches here in Biloxi.. Best wishes, Ken
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Date: 9/22/2013 7:57:00 PM
Hi Leo... stopping in to leave smiles :-) :-).... :-) :) :) :0 hehehe.. stop by and say hi.. when your on line.. XOXXOXOO>..Linda
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Date: 9/22/2013 8:29:00 AM
- Undress you ... use sunscreen and enjoy the sun on the beach Leonora! - Thanks for a glimpse of your pleasant day - All the best to you !! - Lovely written!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/22/2013 1:28:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 9/22/2013 1:16:00 AM
Yes, I am a Libran, so thanks anyway,
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Date: 9/22/2013 12:56:00 AM
ps... this one's making me smile. I'm a libra. gotta love me:-). are you ready to celebrate our birthdays. I know many Libras waiting:) im gonna join that beach imagery you got going on here... lol.... such a fun and entertaining poem. glad I logged back on to read a few poems. ... luv luv...hugs hugs... Linda
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Date: 9/22/2013 12:51:00 AM
hello...my sweetest sis... lol..yes I'm up. working late late, preparing for Sunday's special. he he he. I snuck on line from Nathan computer. I missed your comment. are you still around. :-)
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Date: 9/22/2013 12:30:00 AM
Leonora, wow, and it is coming on up with your summer break, right? So your summer starts in October ? how cool. TEll me your Bday. I forgot!
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