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Summer time

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Summer time

A lake so calming-

 when frozen, now children splash.
  
  The Sun in control.

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  1. Date: 3/31/2010 5:40:00 PM
    Love them haikus. Ta ta

  1. Date: 3/31/2010 4:54:00 PM
    its so hot in some places during the season of summer. great write. i can see the imagery(: -Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 3/31/2010 12:15:00 PM
    Nice Haiku Gareth, lets hope summer is not far away so we can hear all the lovely sounds around a bustling lake >> James

  1. Date: 3/31/2010 5:24:00 AM
    Good morning Gareth, I enjoyed reading your beautiful poetry this morning. Please continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/30/2010 9:00:00 PM
    the sun is in control alright:)

  1. Date: 3/30/2010 4:38:00 PM
    sound good to me!!

  1. Date: 3/30/2010 2:13:00 PM
    That sun brings excitement to the lake, Gareth. Winter does seem to be a period of hibernation associated with more solemn moods, but summertime never fails to rejuvenate us. Indeed, we all splash like children when an inviting sun beckons. This is a terrific haiku! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/30/2010 2:04:00 PM
    very nice I love the summer time loved it faleshia