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Summer Says Goodbye

Summers saying goodbye today And winter will arrive bumble bees are on their way looking for their hive Flowers are looking tired today where once there was a fine display Robins found his way again No more jenny wren Winter will creep in again then will come the golden rain Snow will fall upon the ground children laughing all around Another winter will slip away And bring us back to that sweet bouquet

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Colleen Bono

Date: 11/27/2009 1:18:00 PM

I posted a new poem called The Time Has Come.Tell me what you think.

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 10/30/2009 2:58:00 PM

Please bring us back to that sweet Bouquet, Thank you for your comments on my poems I wish i had children the poem is about my Neices who i wish were my mine, I only wish they were my children , my consolation is they remember me and for that i am give thank's , Keep writting Love Chris

Pamela Griffiths

Date: 10/19/2009 3:24:00 PM

Great poem Kate, Thanks for your comments. Pam

John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo

Date: 10/19/2009 4:52:00 AM

Good write on the passing of summer great feel to to it indeed.

John Freeman

Date: 10/1/2009 9:40:00 AM

Beautiful rhyming poetry Kate. Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed the read. Sincerely Mowes

Danny Nunn

Date: 9/29/2009 4:54:00 PM

Good write Kate, you can see it all happening in your words, good job..Danny

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/29/2009 1:08:00 PM

Such a lovely way to recount the passage of summer to winter and back to summer again, Kate. It's the circle of life and we should enjoy every minute! Wish I lived up North where you get to see snow falling. I was raised there and your poem reminds me how much I miss it! Love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 9/29/2009 1:01:00 PM

Beautiful poem Kate, awesome imagery for the reader >> James