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Summer Haiku

Shadetree cools the ground fluffy white clouds, hide harsh rays Perfect summer day Inspired by the photo for the Haiku Contest by Raul Moreno

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Brandee Augustus

Date: 8/3/2009 2:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in this haiku contest!

Sue Mason

Date: 7/27/2009 1:48:00 PM

Beautifully done, Trudy. One of my favorites and congratulations on your win in Raul's contest!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/27/2009 1:07:00 PM

Trudy, congratulations on your success in Raul's contest. Love, Carol

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/25/2009 3:38:00 PM

Trudy, how are you??? Beautiful haiku! Warmest thanks for the congrats and right back to you. So thoughtful of you to stop by, and I so appreciate it. Hope life is good. Love & hugs, Shar xoxo

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/25/2009 1:06:00 PM

remarkable peace portrayed in this winning haiku! congrats! Trudy!! jimbo

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/25/2009 12:33:00 PM

This is lovely Trudy. Congraulations on you win. Thank you for you comments. Love, Joyce

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/25/2009 6:46:00 AM

WEll done!! Congratulations Trudy!!!

Brian Strand

Date: 7/25/2009 2:54:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Trudy.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno

Date: 7/25/2009 2:07:00 AM

Trudy, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

Daver Austin

Date: 7/9/2009 8:42:00 AM

Yep!...makes me wanta throw a blanket, lie down and dream under that there tree. daver

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/8/2009 5:36:00 PM

Serene and nicely done! Love this haiku!!

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/8/2009 11:04:00 AM

Done in proper 5-7-5 form. Fine work - feep it up! Yours Matthew Anish

Jim Wilson

Date: 7/8/2009 10:04:00 AM

Nice and relaxing. Thanks.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/8/2009 9:26:00 AM

Trudy, good luck in the contest. You have done an excellent job with your Haiku. Love, Carol

Christopher Higgins

Date: 7/8/2009 8:02:00 AM

You have written about that photo so well. This is a very haiku.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/8/2009 7:56:00 AM

Nicely done! Good luck in the contest. BG

Michael Jordan

Date: 7/8/2009 7:15:00 AM

Good morning Trudy - Loved this haiku and I wish you the best of luck in the contest - God Bless, MJ